The lighting first of all is nicely executed. The location is definitely ideal, and very characteristic to the artist. The model gives this shot a nice touch of originality, and he's well placed to it. The camera settings for this picture are very nicely adjusted, making all the colours and light sources to look appealing to the viewer.
The title makes me think about the story behind the picture, and it is always a positive thing.
If I would change anything in this picture, it would probably be the clothing of the model. Although I don't really know how I would change it but maybe there could be a better choice. Maybe he could be in nude? Then it would be even more original!